BigBoyJenkins
Honestly, my grammar sucks, and idek if I'm gonna do well when I write, but everyone gots to start somewhere right. So I'm gonna try to write something I think is interesting but not too complicated.
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From what i can telll, this sounds pretty logical, i will say tho, try not to drag this arc for hundreds and hundreds of chapters. If you can me it good awesome , but so far the story makes sense and connects well. But i would love to see if the MC could take control of the world will instead of the demon will, but again if you make the story good then i dont really care😂. Just keep uploading
I’ve read up to 70 chapters out of 90ish. All i can tell you is that the author is doing something right. Idk what it is, but the story seems to be missing info, but the reader doesn’t miss it. If anything the reader knows more than the MC’s. Which i think is one of the best parts. Next is how the readers and the mc’s are learning and growing with the power systems. All i hope if that this story goes on for a nice long while and the author takes his time perfecting this work of art.
Savants I believe
Hey author, all i wanna say is keep up the good work. The grammar and writing of your book is already amazing. I think what you need most is just more chapters. I know people love to binge read, so eventually people will start reading when your chapters start to climb up
Please have times skips, i love the pacing of the story, but i dont want the characters to be barely 30-40 when the books ends, throw in a few times skips so we can see massive improvements, i feel like a lot of authors are afraid to age there character’s. Also please give us some POV’s of KALEB, maybe Alice.