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This novel seems interesting and good, but please consider rewriting it. The grammar and spelling are poor, and the interactions with other characters feel off. Additionally, the story flow is problematic, giving me a headache trying to read it. Perhaps you could use ChatGPT; it might take only a day or two to fix all these issues.
Archon of the alsike.
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ah, well, the story flows. It's actually pretty fine. it's just the writing so bad it makes it confusing. Though I will admit that when I was that amateur, I tended to skip over a great chunk of story bits to get to the juicy action. I was so confident in writing at the time. As for repairing it, the story from that point the beginning to now is so vastly different in quality that even I, as the author, can't figure out what i was thinking. sorry about the lack of quality, and I apologize if my past selves writing give you a headache so to summarize, the entire book beginning is completely unsalvagable because I don't remember what I was thinking when I wrote it.
"You should rewrite this novel. It was good in the first few chapters, and you have good ideas for a novel, like 'Archon of the Also,' 'Others Deadland's Global,' and 'Tower of God. Faal Rahgol Zhaoga.' It's 2024; you could create a good concept novel. If your English is not good, use AI and just ask it to fix flaws in the writing and correct the grammar.
Ferasight:ah, well, the story flows. It's actually pretty fine. it's just the writing so bad it makes it confusing. Though I will admit that when I was that amateur, I tended to skip over a great chunk of story bits to get to the juicy action. I was so confident in writing at the time. As for repairing it, the story from that point the beginning to now is so vastly different in quality that even I, as the author, can't figure out what i was thinking. sorry about the lack of quality, and I apologize if my past selves writing give you a headache so to summarize, the entire book beginning is completely unsalvagable because I don't remember what I was thinking when I wrote it.
haha, you gave up before reaching recent chapters. I did start rewriting it. The whole book got reset from recent chapters backward
zak_moe_5413: "You should rewrite this novel. It was good in the first few chapters, and you have good ideas for a novel, like 'Archon of the Also,' 'Others Deadland's Global,' and 'Tower of God. Faal Rahgol Zhaoga.' It's 2024; you could create a good concept novel. If your English is not good, use AI and just ask it to fix flaws in the writing and correct the grammar.