Read everything so far, due to that cover... Cough Cough Anyway, it's quite the good read, and quite interesting as well. Story is super B, and im already loving that loli vampire just after chapter 1. Author has a good imagination, and is able to tell a very good to read story. HOWEVER there's the problem of grammar, which often appears in conversations, in which the author isnt able to properply indicate if the MC or someone else is talking, or him thinking. grammar usually gets messed up when author tries to explain a conversation that is ongoing, especially in the first chapter. it rarely appears on the later chapters though, and mostly in the longer chapters. Im assuming the author is just tired from writing kekeke anyway, other that that, I really love the story this novel tells. All I need is more uploads! And please fix chapters one, or you might lose potential readers author sama! To anyone about to read this novel, read it! its really good, and only need some fixing in the long chapters. grammar, punctuations, and indications
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