Review Detail of DsDMonumental in Infinite Wanderer

So I recently finished chapter 3, and I have to say that I genuinely am intrigued by the character and the world you've created! That being said, I noticed that the writing style was very fast paced, and a lot of information gets said at once- Maybe for future chapters slow down with the descriptions, take some time to observe the surrounding and paint a higher definition picture in both the readers, and the protagonist's minds. Despite that one really fixable minor detail, it was really fun and entertaining to read. Keep writing!