Haha, that’s actually one of the pitfalls I am trying to avoid :)

Thank you so much for the review it helps me out a lot in terms of developing! I will take the idea of slowing down into my mind, this is actually something I wanted to work on from the jump so the fact that you still kept with the story despite this minor detail is great news to me. <3

Which part?

Things in volume 1 ended up a bit slow, that is why I am taking so much time on Volume 2. I thank you for your feedback and I hope you will continue reading! <3

Thank you sm for the review! <3 I’m glad you enjoy my writing style :), you’re feedback is really helpful to be honest because, I actually haven’t released the second volume as I wanted to improve my writing skill moving forward, I intend to develop and go into the structure of the various countries as the MC reaches them as I have already planned a few things for just that. Once again thank you for the A1 quality review and any further feedback or reccommendations would be appreciated!

Thank you! Volume 2 is almost completed, please stay tuned! <3