Review Detail of Dragon912 in Global Reincarnation: Becoming A God With My Unlimited Revive

I’m convinced that some people just don’t know wat a good novel is, if I was just getting into novels and I read this as my first one I’d probably not see all the crazy flaws in this. But I’ve been read for a while and I can’t just ignore how bad it is. Okay spoilers from here: Premise: tbh the reason I even got into this is because I saw promise in the synopsis but 33 chapters in and I’m very disappointed. World building: if youre gonna have a novel with a broken mc you NEED to have proper world building but there is absolutely none so far. You’d think that that the first thing u do when going to a new world would be to look for maps, books, or even ask someone what country you’re in where your at what’s the date. Yeah no it’s just left up in the air Characters: the mc has a VERY generic backstory which I suppose should be skipped because It doesn’t explain why he then becomes a suicidal Maniac. His system is only supposed to make it so that he can revive indefinitely but that doesn’t explain why he feels no pain at all when he dies, It doesn’t explain why he has no qualms of dying either. From what I remember he was only supposed to get a portion of the memories of the beast he reincarnated into but now they changed it so he gets a 90 percent Bru. His summoner is this mysterious little girl which you don’t really care about because the story gives no substance to her character. there’s no character development because at this point he’s doing everything for her or everything is just dropped on her plate. in a story like this where the mc is OP you need to have good side characters, the side characters are people that need there backstorys explained. like his summoner is supposed to be a young girl which has no job at all but somehow with both her parents dead is able to live in a three-bedroom house. Her friend which you think was a bully or an arrogant person is actually her friend which is hinted at immediately as the MC gets put in the world pretty ,much the little girl saved the friend from dying and so now they’re like best friends. I would comment on other people in the story so far but there are none literally there are none. some of the people just come in and come out like the older lady that joined their group she has no substance she kinda just became attached to them for some reason the two twins that were in their group as well immediately die and it’s kind of just like glossed over youd think these kids would be like even more scared because they were just talking to the kid the other day or something like that no they don’t it’s for a second until like oh yeah they’re scared and that’s pretty much it. Grammar/sentences: I don’t personal have a problem with the grammar it seems okay but the sentences have no substance and the names are not creative like I think it was chapter 28 where they introduced the evil energy organization 😑that has to be the worst name for an evil organization I have ever heard especially for a Chinese novel. Nationalism: Im in the early parts of this novel so I didn’t really see any patriotic or racist or crazy nationalist writing but something that does confuse me is these Asian novels always have these Korean, Chinese, etc. names and it’s not just like one place has it not just one world has it nope EVERYONE has these types of names and it loses the fantasy aspect for me personally. Overall: i’m not gonna go to in depth anymore with the flaws of this novel I just wanna say it is not worth the four star rating that it got if you’re an avid reader this is going to be a trash novel if you’re new you may like this because you can skip over all the flaws this story has but overall it’s not good the characters are not good the world building not good the pacing is even more atrocious like the dude immediately goes to different world and he’s immediately embroiled in a countrywide fight with an organization for no reason really besides oh this kid(his summoner) is very smart. Hopes: to be honest I had high hopes for this and I didn’t think it would go down this path or be bad like this novel is right now I had thought that it Be a story about leveling up and seeing all these new world and getting to learning about these new cultures in these Worlds or even him just becoming like a guardian beast of some country would’ve been a cool spin on the story but I’m not gonna stick around to read anymore it’s just not that good especially with the comments saying that it gets very racist and very nationalist I’m just not gonna try anymore it’s not really good to begin with so I’m not gonna waste my time anymore.✌🏾