its one of the best harry potter fanfiction I've ever read. there are some plot problems like harry and ashlyn's parents and how they behave for example lilly evans is known for her kindness and james potter is known for his righteous personality but they treat ashlyn so bad that you cant understand why though so far there is much to explore about the story and all the why's probably in later chapters(I hope Moons continues his writing) I like the goth vibe of the story and some logic part of it ITS NOT THE MOST PERFECT STORY WRITING YOU COULD FIND BUT THE STORY WORTH A PROPER ENDING AS IT HAS WONDERFULL POTENTIAL
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