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aa_aa_818211mthPostedWith absolute certainty this book is one of the best fanfics I've ever read . It has a good plot.The author is a great writer. Characters are in sync. The father / mentor figure of anakin is really nice. I didn't read much of the worm , just the first 4-5 volumes (maby start reading it again) but can say how good of a mixture this fic is and the charm that force has brought to worm. Can't Wait to read more . Thanks CaptaoCav for this story. keep going friend.
- aa_aa_81821yrCommented
endure it *
"Implants…" Xavier explained. "Usually done surgically, but… I thought you could ensure it and you did. Though, that will probably remain there…" He twirled his fingers, projecting Angela's face on the wall. - aa_aa_81821yrReplied to Coldman
it always start with 2 xd
An Eternal was entitled to many things – many things he wouldn't pursue, but two women should be reasonable enough. - aa_aa_81821yrCommented
yeah i dont buy it
Xavier didn't want to be there when Angela tried to explain to her mother why they didn't need birth control – or maybe, Angela herself had yet to figure out that she couldn't bare an Eternal's child. - aa_aa_81821yrReplied to Ronin46
yeah he was a student of apocalypse from back in the time of egypt
Luckily for Sinister, he had lived for a long time and gathered many favours and followers. - aa_aa_81821yrCommented
here comes infant ninja turtles xd
"My thoughts exactly," Scott answered. "So, let's finish up here and see if there are alligators or Mutants in the sewers of New York." Speed was of the essence for Scott, hoping to get to them before they got too set in their ways. If he could get to them and offer them another option, then he could stop the Morlocks from seeing themselves as sub-humans. A dangerous mindset that had led to increased hatred and bitterness towards all those leaving on the surface, not just humans but other Mutants. - aa_aa_81821yrCommented
dune refresce ??
He faced every challenge and foe that came his way without fear because fear was the mind-killer and in order to succeed, Scott knew that his mind would be his greatest weapon. Against humans, mutants, aliens, demons, gods and powerful cosmic entities, Scott powered forwards on an unending campaign as he scaled the sheer cliff towards his goal. - aa_aa_81821yrReplied to Hani_Dje
in some versions he gets his powers around 11-12 so 4 -5 years i say
Peter definitely didn't have enough money to rent an apartment or fix his costume; the little food he ate wasn't enough for his body that craved the energy food provided. Over the months his body had slowly started to get skinnier and skinnier. This didn't impact him much while crime fighting as he still had super strength and powers, but he definitely wasn't at his prime. Over the years that he had been spider man, he had never been this bad. - aa_aa_81821yrCommented
kinda doesnt make sense out of the game
<Double Air Dash [unlocked]MAX>🔓 - aa_aa_81821yrCommented
is she an oc??
POV - Sarah Symanski - aa_aa_81821yrPosted
so far (up to chapter 8) the story is good enough that i added it in my collection. there are some out of order parts but i like how the writer managed to rap it up in later chapters. the changed pov was out of expectation but appreciated its still raw so author pls work more on realistic parts of the story not every part of it needs to be moral lessons its a personal opinion but i would like to have a slow story line with more characters mixed in have multiple pov's (noy necessary all of it about love and friends) develope your background you have a character that due to his early hard life and depression he might not know about all the history of the world he is in and he also could be under surveillance of shield and later finds about it he doesnt need to go to space like in 20 chapters if you have time and want to develope it more i advise some changes to mcu and more focus on comics and stuff like that he doesnt need to be omnipotent marvel have enough heros to support every crisis but you could just fit him in between develope him more you didnt specifi his exact power level so you could move around it last word you have good penmanship have good imagination (i really like how you made him a gentle person without any cringe there ) i hope to see more of this story p.s. read "worm" if you have time good story can influence your stor in a good way p.s also more of conner's daily life would be appreciated like (i can easily see a 100+ chapter story here worth reading good luck)
- aa_aa_81821yrReplied to xxnoobmasterxx
bro except for last season the rest were from the books what are you talking about ??????
Well… It could've been worse. I mean it could have landed on Warhammer 40k. 'But are Game of Thrones and A Song of Ice and Fire, not different worlds?' I quickly asked. Ignoring the next option for now. - aa_aa_81821yrReplied to Mattex97
9 actually but small differences in the whole plot (the writing quality neutralizes it)
I'm Anakin Skywalker, ten years old. A slave, working at Watto's, who sells all sorts of junk, and not junk either. - aa_aa_81821yrPosted
great start , very interesting to the point that i added to my library directly but after chapter 3 it gets shallower and shallower until sex stuff which is complete bullshit (not a fan of horny author sorry dude) the whole idea of game stuff backstory and ... was great but details are not satisfying and after chapter 3 its not even a dc fanfic its just gore type of sexual story which doesn't make any sense (like suddenly there is a magical drug yoy get 2 girls fuck them and tada you are cool .... sorry i cant relate)
- aa_aa_81821yrCommentedDo not be alarmed if I don't update you every day. I want a quality story and I need a lot of time to think, research cannon and wiki, and fit components of the Star Wars Genesis game into star wars lore in a way that fits.
- aa_aa_81821yrReplied to DigitalSignal
that sound fun
That's all and make sure to give ideas in the comments for story development. There is a big blank space of time that is not mentioned in the wikis from 25,000 BBY and 8000 BBY. I haven't decided if it I should focus on that missing history or jump to the 'Sith Empire War' in 8000 BBY etc. - aa_aa_81821yrReplied to Snollygoster
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just two words
[ Indeed there are people with powers in your world, but they've been around for thousands of years. You would know them as Daoists, or cultivators. And before you ask, yes it's just like those light novels you read.] - aa_aa_81821yrReplied to ImaginationGalaxy
yeah im done with this novel
"This is one of the most powerful wands I have ever seen. Perhaps this will be the birth of the new dark lord and maybe I will regret selling this wand." - aa_aa_81821yrReplied to Bryan_Kross
yeah bullshit represents harry potter : tokyo revenge 2 (made by chinese industry "hail motherland" based on the top seller korean manhuwa ) __in english__
Inside the box was a pure black wand with a skull carving at the end of the handle. Then I took it to my hand. Lights in the room started to fade and shadows gathered around me. Suddenly I was staring at a gigantic pair of red eyes. Then everything returned to normal. Huh was that just a hallucination?