aside from writing quality (which is kinda below average, 2 stars ), other criteria are average at best(3 stars). the way author use 1st person pov on the narration is kinda bad and make most of the narration awkward to read(what should be epic turned into cringe). author need to learn when/how write it in 3rd person pov, when to use 3rdPPoV and 1stPPoV there are also typos/missing words in almost every chapter. the way author write the system notifications is also not that good, it's uncomfortable to read or sometimes confusing because reasons above. in conclusion: it's worth reading if you don't really care about the writings.
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