Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
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I believe this rating is justified. he literally refuses to kill anyone that matters yet always touting that he was going to kill em but somehow fate intervenes, the terrible author, and they never die. he cries about wanting peace but never tries to make peace. only killing because "thats his only option." He uses names people are familiar and invested in to create actual impact because his words alone could never so that. and these people fall for it. its hypocritical in nature but he is able to fool the foolish masses on here. Thank God I have enough money to relax and never have to resort to terrible writing like this. lol id love to see him attempt an original story. Lord, id pay to read that comedy.
Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
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Just use constructive criticism and point out what the author did wrong and what the author could fix on it because fanfic writers only write either for enjoyment, for thereselfes or for others, to better their writing skills so they can write professionally and make a good novel to get published so their is no reason to say that unless it's something that can help a author grow.
Bro, I don't know if you have enough money, but I do know you have enough free time to waste your words on a fanfiction writer, seriously if I could write an original, I could have had, I'm not capable enough, that's it, try looking for something meaningful in life, if you just want attention, I can ask everyone else who reads this book to just give you a hug
Navy_King:And by the way, if you were reading this garbage anyway, you should have done after the whole, I literally killed, Third Hokage, Orochimaru and Danzo, so do some research first