Review Detail of LordPocky in Pokémon : An Unexpected Journey
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the story itself is good. I do have a couple of sticking points though that keep me from rating this book higher. number one is that this is listed as a harem. I'm now over 220 chapters into it and there's no real harem. second is that we are also 220 chapters in and the main character still can't accept he is Ash. this should have been handled 100 chapters ago and mew would show up and either tell him there was a way home and there was no way home. The fact that this is still a question this far into the book it makes me sad.
Pokémon : An Unexpected Journey
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Sorry for a late response but here it is: 1- The character is a 10 year old, how am I even supposed to portray the harem side when most of the characters aren't even in puberty? But as the characters age further then the romance is going to happen. 2- Austin doesn't accept Ash's identity but that doesn't mean he brings it up every other chapter, there are like 3 chapters where Austin rejects or struggles with Ash Ketchum's identity or a passing dialogue where Austin is nervous when referring to Ash Ketchum's mom as mom, I refer to the character as Austin in the 3rd person because he is the character of Austin first.
