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Welcome to Sinnocent Dark, where all the steam valves have broken, and there's a ton of steam everywhere Thankfully this book knows how to give a proper build up. From the get go we see the main characters have various interactions, including the relationship between Veronica and Maya from their time in school to years later in the Underworld. The author has done a good job at showing their personalities which gives more insight to the reader at knowing them more. I appreciate how much of the telling is used to describe the situation the characters have in their first person POV, or the background within the third person POV Speaking of POV, at some point in the middle of the chapters currently released, there seemed to be too many changes. There's First person, third person, vice versa, then we get the story from Veronica's and Maya's perspectives. Change of perspectives between characters is nice but if possible, maybe the author should choose just one main POV: first or third. Because even though everything was written well, it was a chore to move between first and third POV each chapter or 2. Overall I would recommend this book for readers who enjoy this particular genre, in addition to books that focus more on character development, cause that seems to be the case with Veronica and Maya since the first chapter.

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Sinnocent: She Was Too Innocent, So I Got F*cked Alongside Her

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Yess the first and the third pov swap has always worried me.. I would love to use third if not for the title being 'I' 😂😂🥲 And I would love to use first, if not for the lack of plot development because its very limiting.. Oh the conundrum! :(