Review Detail of NotBeatrix in You're Just One Kiss

The writing is pretty good and the author utilizes a lot of clear descriptions. You can really visualize what the characters look and act like. There are a few grammatical errors though, and some of the scenes are bit confusing to know what was going on. The prologue for example, often moved from scene to scene and it was a little difficult for me to keep up. I did like Angelina though. She seems relatebale and interesting enough. The supernatural aspect of the story is also interesting and I look forward to seeing it unfold in the next few chapters.