If you’re looking for a simple, quick read then this is definitely a choice for you. There’s not alot of drama or scheming involved but quite a lot of sweet love overload. The grammar is good, and names and pronouns are consistent. There are some frustrating things - I can’t understand why she doesn’t continue to study medicine in the book world, it would make things alot easier - especially as she loves it so much and has never voiced a want for the easy life of a rich madam’s life. That and her strength which crossed over with her? I’m not a fan of that. If someone crosses over then the physical attributes of the host shouldn’t change.
The Ideal Belly
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