Review Detail of SaltedEgg in One Piece: Struggle of the Weak

The beginning of the story is bad and mc is stupid. Not seeking any info or power when he reincarnated in "manga" world is really stupid. Even if he doesn't read OP, but he read FMA and Demon slayer which show how cruel the world is in "manga". Some people say the story will be better in the future, but I didn't like some of the decisions the author make, so I didn't continue reading it. Especially the "dead of loved ones" and the "no harem but feel like harem". Author kill Mc's family, but unlike his mother and brother who reacts and eventually get killed, mc just hides in the crowd even afraid to scream when they get killed. i'm not saying he has to fight back, but at least he can show some action. No harem is ok, but add some women to pestering mc is annoying. Writing harem is hard, some people don't like harem because they think the women just fallen without any development. The way that author chose is harder, because author chose to make no harem but the women will never give up even mc rejected them. Author needs a very good reason and make a good plot development so that it can explain why the other woman never give up on mc. Well, for me if there's no harem, mc doesn't need more women, if there're more women then make a harem. Picking one woman out of many other women who never give up on mc feels like playing with a woman's heart, so I don't like it. Well, good luck for your writing, many people say that the story will be better, that means author make a good progress in his/her writing so keep writing.👍