Review Detail of LILAying_onBed in Man?Monster?God?
Review detail
I really try my best to read this novel and it make me feel I'm reading an machine translated novel. It's not that bad, the plot is ok, the development is ok but the grammar. The punctuation marks, the capital letters. It's like you're not even try to check before you publish the chapters. PLEASE EDIT THE CHAPTERS USING GRAMMARLY. My brain hurt a bit trying to understand while reading it. I read novels to relax not to hurt my brain. By the way, keep on going author-san, I know you can improve more. Don't take my words as something that drag you down.
Man?Monster?God?
LORDOFORIGINALINK
Liked it!
LIKEReplies1
Thanks I am new to writing after chapter everything improves and I wouldn’t mond u pointing out mistakes I have hand wrote everything I am Africa American so it’s not machine trans I already got an editor to edit my first 47 chapters besides 3&4 so they should be resolved and I have long since improved on my grammer and punc but if I missed something I would greatly acept a small chap commwnt that can help me improve this novel Thanks for the review