Review Detail of Taimur_Ali in Multiverse of Marvel
Review detail
The mc is turning out to be completely useless . This is basically a crossover with the mc acting as a bridge. There is no need to add more characters to marvel. It's not an isekai story. The MC is weak and superficial . He brings nothing to the story and has no character development except for introducing stories and characters .
Multiverse of Marvel
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Uh huh this System is useless he will be better just training in some dojo that wasting so much time and effort in a System that doesn't provide anything for the MC. I just stop because there's no growth in the MC at all and it looks like there no gonna be one either. The good thing is well written that it
As I said before that people jump to conclusions way too fast. I do admit that I didn't include much the MC in beginning. But this isn't all about the MC. It's a fan fiction, not a story about how MC dominates everything.
Juhiko:Uh huh this System is useless he will be better just training in some dojo that wasting so much time and effort in a System that doesn't provide anything for the MC. I just stop because there's no growth in the MC at all and it looks like there no gonna be one either. The good thing is well written that it
thelightedghost:As I said before that people jump to conclusions way too fast. I do admit that I didn't include much the MC in beginning. But this isn't all about the MC. It's a fan fiction, not a story about how MC dominates everything.
Oh shut up the story is perfect continue πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·
Respect others opinions, I love this story, but at the same time, I acknowledge that there are other people who have exact opposite views, the mc does grow to be very strong in the future, but there is a lot more to the story than mc and how strong is he.
jeniffer_brites:Oh shut up the story is perfect continue πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·π§π·
As an author, especially in these types of platform you should always be prepared to give a fun story that people would want to read. A profound one that excites the readers, establishing a great story that makes the readers thirst for more. That's why they invented the term and the strategy of incorporating "cliff hanggers" and "suspense". This how it works in the world of literature. Manga/Manhwa/Manhua writers and other novel writers know this since they have always been warned by editors.
thelightedghost:As I said before that people jump to conclusions way too fast. I do admit that I didn't include much the MC in beginning. But this isn't all about the MC. It's a fan fiction, not a story about how MC dominates everything.
I agree, he doesn't grow stronger; he just changes into stronger people or summons them to do the fighting for him, I've made the mistake of reading fanfics like this before, I never liked a single one and always dropped them before the 10th chapter so I don't waste my time, but this fanfic is worse than those because at least other fanfic authors have the decency to tell us in the title that their fanfic has a template system or some variant of it.
Well if i wanted to read some marvel story then i could have read marvel comics π i am here to see a mc doing something that marvel comics didn't. So sorry and bye.
thelightedghost:As I said before that people jump to conclusions way too fast. I do admit that I didn't include much the MC in beginning. But this isn't all about the MC. It's a fan fiction, not a story about how MC dominates everything.
Agreed, most importantly he does not act like a human, like you said he is only a bridge. All the comments: Why is the MC not gaining powers for himself? You know, like a normal human would act? Hence why the real humans, the readers, keep commenting about it, because that seems like step 1. The author went with: MC is to stupid, plot armor is fine. Either the author is good, but weird, and wrote an MC that lacks real grasp of reality: Relying on others with powers rather than himself. Or the author himself is naive and lacks understanding of the world (even ours, let alone a Marvel\crossover) and doesn't know how humans think. This is of chapter 50, and we are told it gets better at 150, even if the story was great the grammar would make it hard to reach that far, both of them? This is low effort story, zero editing, and thought process on the story is nill.