Review Detail of CopyPaste1 in Multiverse of Marvel
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i dont know how people give so high rate to this! every chapter has so many plot holes and a lot of things have zero logic! .. .. .... .. ..
Multiverse of Marvel
thelightedghost
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FanfictionLover:At least point out these so-called plot holes so the author could improve. Not everyone could just start off writing wonderful stories on their first try, second try or even third try, they have to learn too. But how could the author improve if you just complain like that?
Well your story doesnt have that much plot hole you are just lack character development and the pace of your story is to fast so that make all your character is feel empty me as a reader doesnt feel attachment with the character(google translate)
thelightedghost:For example ? Can you please let me know. I will try to change if there are any big plot holes
I understand. But there will enough growth. As time goes by. I have tried giving the MC enough time for a proper growth in future chapters đ
D1cky_101:Well your story doesnt have that much plot hole you are just lack character development and the pace of your story is to fast so that make all your character is feel empty me as a reader doesnt feel attachment with the character(google translate)
hm can make bruce find cure for tony's poison instead of relying on his dads past project to find a new element i mean they r one of the brightest minds of their worlds
thelightedghost:I understand. But there will enough growth. As time goes by. I have tried giving the MC enough time for a proper growth in future chapters đ
lok_98:finally someone noticed that...I was feeling I am the only one who noticed that.
some logic holes like how his input is golden in the post production process,his dad accepting that his normal son suddenly become a superb story creator, no in depth characterization and your stance on the technology advancement of the world is fluctuating.sometimes the technology is not developed and suddenly the technology is developed....I couldn't stand after sixth chapter....I don't know how to describe it but it's feel people are too passive or too accepting of the mc who was just a normal boy just a day before......and this creates logic holes.yeah this is fanfic so we should not expect much logic but still some of the reaction of people and his dad reaction to mc is plain weird.
thelightedghost:example?
There were two plot holes that I saw. 1. someone mentioned it before, people are way to passive from the things he does. He is a whole child, not a teenager, a child and he made a whole movie and no one questioned it. He had a whole movie planned from start to finish and no one questioned it. He could have made a children's book and then have it adapt to being a movie. Him showing his dad the book and his dad saying this would be a good movie would be better. 2. He is a child (I honestly believe the first mistake was making him a child). Barely in I believe middle school and had him (who showed no signs of having at least above average intelligence) talk to an adult about business like he was a diplomat. 3. I wasn't gonna add this but his dad or at least his nanny is pretty involved with his life. And they didn't question anything. If my child starts acting like this and I see a huge jump in maturity or even the way he talks, im taking that child to a hospital or a church. 4. I know i said two, but if you had made him an adult with a degree or even a college student majoring in this degree; you could have closed over a lot of plot holes
True I made him kind of young which was little off for my part as I wanted MC to be young during the first Avengers movie. But the thing is when I made the novel I thought more from a wuxia point of view as such 11 year old being smart is kind of normal. But as the story went on I shifted to more western style writing. I know it's off putting and I apologize for that. Though I hope you will still like the story
Madison_Anderson_7528:There were two plot holes that I saw. 1. someone mentioned it before, people are way to passive from the things he does. He is a whole child, not a teenager, a child and he made a whole movie and no one questioned it. He had a whole movie planned from start to finish and no one questioned it. He could have made a children's book and then have it adapt to being a movie. Him showing his dad the book and his dad saying this would be a good movie would be better. 2. He is a child (I honestly believe the first mistake was making him a child). Barely in I believe middle school and had him (who showed no signs of having at least above average intelligence) talk to an adult about business like he was a diplomat. 3. I wasn't gonna add this but his dad or at least his nanny is pretty involved with his life. And they didn't question anything. If my child starts acting like this and I see a huge jump in maturity or even the way he talks, im taking that child to a hospital or a church. 4. I know i said two, but if you had made him an adult with a degree or even a college student majoring in this degree; you could have closed over a lot of plot holes
thelightedghost:True I made him kind of young which was little off for my part as I wanted MC to be young during the first Avengers movie. But the thing is when I made the novel I thought more from a wuxia point of view as such 11 year old being smart is kind of normal. But as the story went on I shifted to more western style writing. I know it's off putting and I apologize for that. Though I hope you will still like the story
I'm one of those people who gave it 5 stars, but I have to agree with this review, because the plot holes are really too many to count. Still though, even now as the story has progressed quite a bit from when I wrote my review, I would now give it 3 stars at a minimum. Mostly because despite all its flaws, the story is enjoyable. Isn't that what's most important?
you just covered my complaint XD. Plus the girlfriend is basically a forced extra. If you wanted a girlfriend, inventing one wasn't too much. She didn't have to be a comic book character or etc.
D1cky_101:Well your story doesnt have that much plot hole you are just lack character development and the pace of your story is to fast so that make all your character is feel empty me as a reader doesnt feel attachment with the character(google translate)
Madison_Anderson_7528:There were two plot holes that I saw. 1. someone mentioned it before, people are way to passive from the things he does. He is a whole child, not a teenager, a child and he made a whole movie and no one questioned it. He had a whole movie planned from start to finish and no one questioned it. He could have made a children's book and then have it adapt to being a movie. Him showing his dad the book and his dad saying this would be a good movie would be better. 2. He is a child (I honestly believe the first mistake was making him a child). Barely in I believe middle school and had him (who showed no signs of having at least above average intelligence) talk to an adult about business like he was a diplomat. 3. I wasn't gonna add this but his dad or at least his nanny is pretty involved with his life. And they didn't question anything. If my child starts acting like this and I see a huge jump in maturity or even the way he talks, im taking that child to a hospital or a church. 4. I know i said two, but if you had made him an adult with a degree or even a college student majoring in this degree; you could have closed over a lot of plot holes
It might be late but, my own problem is about the girlfriend part:it was kind of forced to me and the second was about her becoming a lantern like one of the green guy has a plan to tie mc to oa and then suddenly the girlfriend gets the ring. Apart from this the story is good for me I have no major problems keep it upđđđ