It's okay-ish... Having read to chapter 20 my one major complaint is that it's too over the top. It's enjoyable enough I guess but I can't immerse myself in the story cause it's just too unreasonable and unrealistic. If you can get past that it seems like it's interesting and given time the writing could be much better so that this stops being an issue. For me I'll not likely try rereading this unless it has over 200 chapters and good reviews
My Will
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LIKEI mean most WebNovels aren't realistic. Still for unrealistic stories to engage the readers requires consistent logic. Supposedly this story takes place in the real world or a similar enough one so that logic would dictate that people and laws react as one would expect them to. That or reasons are given to explain the deviation from expectations. Logic gets trampled too much in the story and no reason or rational is given to justify it. While the MC being able to do what he does is not well explained my issue is mostly with the rest of the world and its people. That is where the logic fails. MC is special. MC has a system. One can expect the MC to defy what is expected. The rest of the world just conforming to the MC's whims does not follow the logic that is put forth
Hahalool:Definitely quite unrealistic and the system does not really explain it self too well. Though i presume the reason for his success is due to the system's rule: "host cannot die before the time ends" ?