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Review Detail of RAMichaels in Are You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?

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Great premise! But please update as there are still issues with the flow while reading. Grammar and word choices. Don't use the same word in the same paragraph or chapter more than once. The editor needs to do a better job by going through every chapter with a fine comb. I love the character. I love the plot. It intrigued me that the author took an actual reality show and turned it into something more. With more stakes on the line, two world renowned show hosts, yet an 8 year old is allowed to join this survival game show. He is determined to win it at all cost because his mother's health depends on it. He is not doing it for fame or ego but for his poor mom. Who would not want to cheer for this 8 year old?

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Are You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?

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