Review Detail of Coldman in In The Shadow of Erebor

A tip: I would change the picture of your book, it looks like one of those stock pictures Webnovel gives you to chose from for free. If you made the front more color full or interesting i think it would draw the interest of a lot more people. Perheps a picture of the city Dale with Erebor in the backround or perhaps the clearing where Fordo and the dwarfs first spot Rivendell in the first Hobbiten movie. The current picture makes the book seem like a half finished project, a project the author doesn’t seem to care much for, these first impressions often tend to make people steer away from the book! Just a tip, and my opinion, take whatever you want away from it. (English is not my first language, but i hope i wrote in an somewhat understandable fashion) ;)