Review Detail of Valixiant in Regressed Reincarnation: How to Escape a Fantasy World!!
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Alright. I kinda lost interest in the novel when the author went for one of those cliche "kidnapping geniuses" scenario. Especially when the kidnappers are literally named "bad guy a". In general, the writing, conversations, etc, feel really awkward overall. First off, writing quality is very poor. There is a ridiculous amount of grammatical mistakes. It's not just missing letters, some words are outright misplaced to the point where it's worse than your average MTL. There is also a ton of run-on sentences that are really awkward to read. The story development is very poor as well. In chapter two, there is a three year time skip. (Main character had to learn how to improve his magic proficiency) So, the main character has 1000x times thinking speed so theres no way it took him THREE YEARS to figure that out. Besides that, the author introduces a bunch of magic terms after this time skip, and then doesn't explain them whatsoever. Half the story so far is just the author listing things that the main character does or already did. Besides, it's very obvious at this point how the author is going to keep giving the main character abilities he "had" in his past life for plot convenience. Character design is meh. I haven't read too far into the novel but every single character here is super bland. It's worse than most novels. Main character's relationship with his brothers is "neutral". They don't bully him like in most novels, they don't help him either. They don't talk to him at all, from what I can see. Aside from that, the main character has two brothers. One is good at using aura (martial arts) and magic. The one good at using aura is a muscle brain, and the one good at using magic has is intelligent. (Not really) Overall, a rather low-quality novel that I can't be asked to read further into. The story doesn't have anything overwhelmingly bad, like most novels on this site does. However, everything is sub-par and lackluster.
Regressed Reincarnation: How to Escape a Fantasy World!!
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The most amusing thing about this is that you will probably never realize the irony in what you just posted.
man_of_culture3030:Dear Author, I want to share these words with you, in hopes you keep writing. The poorest way to face life is to face it with a sneer. There are many men who feel a kind of twisted pride in cynicism; there are many who confine themselves to criticism of the way others do what they themselves dare not even attempt. There is no more unhealthy being, no man less worthy of respect, than he who either really holds, or feigns to hold, an attitude of sneering disbelief toward all that is great and lofty, whether in achievement or in that noble effort which, even if it fails, comes to second achievement. A cynical habit of thought and speech, a readiness to criticise work which the critic himself never tries to perform, an intellectual aloofness which will not accept contact with life’s realities — all these are marks, not as the possessor would fain to think, of superiority but of weakness. They mark the men unfit to bear their part painfully in the stern strife of living, who seek, in the affection of contempt for the achievements of others, to hide from others and from themselves in their own weakness. The role is easy; there is none easier, save only the role of the man who sneers alike at both criticism and performance. -Teddy Roosevelt
If theres no negative reviews how is anyone supposed to improve? The whole point of a review is to *review* it, not to spread positivity? Go take your self-righteous nonsense elsewhere.
macqueennnn:STOP DEMOTIVATING. You can criticise positively. This is his first story ig...you can see he tried. If you don't like this story don't read further and move on. No one asked you for such a negative review.
I can judge a novel based on a few chapters. Do you know anything about novels whatsoever? The opening portion of a novel is one of the most important parts. If it's bad, no matter how good the middle/end is, people won't like it simply because they won't read that far. As for this whole positivity/negativity nonsense you keep spouting? I couldn't care less.
macqueennnn:you " haven't read too far" so you can not judge the novel based on few chapters you read. there is way to criticize positively and give "review" without so much negativity.
Dear Author, I want to share these words with you, in hopes you keep writing. The poorest way to face life is to face it with a sneer. There are many men who feel a kind of twisted pride in cynicism; there are many who confine themselves to criticism of the way others do what they themselves dare not even attempt. There is no more unhealthy being, no man less worthy of respect, than he who either really holds, or feigns to hold, an attitude of sneering disbelief toward all that is great and lofty, whether in achievement or in that noble effort which, even if it fails, comes to second achievement. A cynical habit of thought and speech, a readiness to criticise work which the critic himself never tries to perform, an intellectual aloofness which will not accept contact with life’s realities — all these are marks, not as the possessor would fain to think, of superiority but of weakness. They mark the men unfit to bear their part painfully in the stern strife of living, who seek, in the affection of contempt for the achievements of others, to hide from others and from themselves in their own weakness. The role is easy; there is none easier, save only the role of the man who sneers alike at both criticism and performance. -Teddy Roosevelt
Valixiant:The most amusing thing about this is that you will probably never realize the irony in what you just posted.
Author, Believe me when I say, some of these people just want attention. They look for a reason to put others down, so that they might feel elevated above them emotionally for a moment. If you look at some of their profiles, it is literally negative comment, after negative comment. They push people away, and treat relationships like disposable tools because they don't value others, I doubt they value themselves. They actively seek out altercations and then play victim when they get checked for their rudeness, calling those around them 'idiots', not understanding that there is a whole world of individuals without access to traditional education, I call them the 'willfully ignorant'. Those people will limp in front of the lame, and then deem it a kindness. Moral of what I am saying is don't give up, fix your mistakes and continue writing, convey your story as best you can, and then do it again, and again. Even stumbling speech may strengthen a weak tongue. Good luck my friend, strive to be happy!