So I read up to ch 30 ish, I'm not certain how the story develops but I feel everything is too rushed, the system and power ups are kinda confusing to understand. maybe it makes sense in the authors head, but it feels like crazy amounts of info dump for something that might be better explained in just a few lines. Also the story kinda cuts and then continues on, but gives backstory to the cut in the next chapter. It seems really unnecessary and makes the reader feel 'wait what happened to xxxx, oh it's in the next chapter'. I'm sure the author has improved from the earlier writing, and if there are some newer works, I will give it a read for sure. TLDR worth reading but expect it to be a bit messy
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