Review Detail of FireEngine in Chronicles of Daoist Fan
Review detail
Well, this is the third time I'm writing a planned novel, so it's safe to say there won't be any newbie mistakes. I really hope you can find this entertaining and worth your time. By now, I don't know how many hours I've spent writing, making characters, brainstorming plot ideas, and coming up with engaging dialogues. I revised my narrative tens of times before settling on first person perspective. You can expect a pretty solid xianxia novel that takes elements from ancient eastern culture, especially Chinese. The power system is well-thought and I've also mapped my world. That said, nothing can be perfect and there might be some things that the readers may not always find interesting to read. I might have to add some new lore, develop the world and give info about the cultivation processes if I deemed such things as necessary. I'll try not to make them seem as info dumps. I hope you'll have the patience and ethics to either read through or just ignore without demonstrating fruitless negativity. I also hope that if you like this novel, then you won't forget that there's always that voting option. Thank you for reading, my novel and this review. Peace~
Chronicles of Daoist Fan
FireEngine
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sry but he feels like those Chinese novel MCs who have no brain to use type... as he did some questionable stuff... i did a comment on that...
FireEngine:XD this mc's design is the villain type. He is bold and unrestrained in his ways.
Lol, too impatient. I'll highlight your comment. Any reader who has read up to chapter 36 may laugh at you. Man, you made my day.
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:sry but he feels like those Chinese novel MCs who have no brain to use type... as he did some questionable stuff... i did a comment on that...
and the most fact i just can't get my head around is the 'comedy' tag with 'high iq' tag is one of the most I don't know what to say but very not likable type of mix... and i wish you didn't go with first pov... for me it's kinda lame... specially when mc does bs ... just a couple of chapters and it fried the nerves... no offense but you said you followed... as it take information from Chinese cultivation novel setup but some stuff seems more not in the information or detached from it than anything... though i don't know your own element you put in as there's no dump of info which in this novel case would help cz it's not you general way... cz the way you setup doesn't mix up with what we know about reading cultivation novels... so yea sometimes info dumps are necessary... and first pov also played a part of not giving us the wide view of things... which also makes it kinda off... no I'm not saying first pov is not necessary ... it's just sometimes first pov needs to come later than just the first start of the novel... I'm not negatively criticizing you just cz... i iust don't know any depth details to go off of... i mean you hardly gave a explanation of some stuff i mentioned...đ it's just with first pov what you wrote is good but with this new setup you got yourself doesn't make it so that we can fill up the info to go about and read... as well as some character issues with the mc ... his behavior and personality is al over the place... i mean one moment he's like a thinker who think before do another moment he's behaving like a brat mc... then after sometime he's behaving like a experienced person who finds the new stiff happening as cringe... which makes is a bad presentation of immersion of the reading... in my opinion... sry if my words don't explain much... but do ask if i miss said something... i mean not all what i thought is written here...đ overall the novel is good... but the way it was executed doesn't make it look that good... either way keep it up... I'll try to read on to see how it goes... but so far I don't feel optimistic about it... no offense...đđ¤
FireEngine:Lol, too impatient. I'll highlight your comment. Any reader who has read up to chapter 36 may laugh at you. Man, you made my day.
upto 12 chapter i read this is the outcome i saw... i mean for me at least... so yea don't know how it goes after 30...đđ¤
FireEngine:Lol, too impatient. I'll highlight your comment. Any reader who has read up to chapter 36 may laugh at you. Man, you made my day.
I didn't see it in the tags, but is there romance? Or since he is evil he won't experience emotions like love, meaning his harem is purely for s*x, cultivation and decoration of sorts?
FireEngine:XD this mc's design is the villain type. He is bold and unrestrained in his ways.
FallenAngeI:I didn't see it in the tags, but is there romance? Or since he is evil he won't experience emotions like love, meaning his harem is purely for s*x, cultivation and decoration of sorts?