Review Detail of Shade_Arjuun in Idling On

Let me be the first to review this story... ahem. First of all author I apologise for the thousands of paragraph comments, but I like to give my thoughts on your ideas immediately so that you know that I'm actively reading and supporting your work ... you put an effort into this so you deserve the attention.. second of all, i must give credit where it is due, the writing quality is top notch, I was never really confused at all.. I understood the story and the flow though some errors do happen at critical moments but it doesn't disparage the quality... the story...oh my God the story.... From the first chapter alerting us of the End of test thing I was already hooked... I was entranced by the concept and I had a roller coaster ride of emotion, following Jack in his story and mourned with him in his loss... His mother....or his mother... just a chapter worth of a character and I was feelig attached ... you ripped that from me author!!! anyway this is a lovely read... world building is still in progress but i have faith in your ability... Let's go author.. sorry for the essay worth of review but I'm really grateful for the adventure... Plus ultra! let's go