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Shade_Arjuun

Shade_Arjuun

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I'm a digital bookworm who is well versed in media... I love horror, fantasy and romance. Yes I'm a romantic...Books make the world more colourful.

2019-07-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun1d
    Posted

    Interesting read. I think it's cool that we get the hook to the story through Cero getting a unique skill that isn't a quantified damage skill or fireball or legendary sword from some such. I appreciated that. While I think the writing quality could use some improvement, I think it's alright. The story development is good. There isn't a feeling of stagnancy, but I do feel like starting off with fights and training might not be the best thing for the first two chapters, but of course, I haven't read a lot of the story and can't say with surety that it's a questionable decision. In any case, I think this novel has great potential. Good work so far!

    I am a Villain within the Heroes Party
    Fantasy · Kiyoki_02
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun1d
    Commented

    huge buns is crazy!

    She is used to living in this remote village. In fact she is somehow taller than me. She is like five feet and five inches tall. Has well toned muscles, developed abs and perfectly curved body and huge buns. A beauty, I presume.
    I am a Villain within the Heroes Party
    Fantasy · Kiyoki_02
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun1d
    Commented

    I can already see where the Fake skill is going with this! I'm intrigued, though I do hope there will never a lot of variety. There's so many ways to use this! I trust in you author

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Mock Battle
    I am a Villain within the Heroes Party
    Fantasy · Kiyoki_02
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun1d
    Commented

    I wish you had given a mini-explanation as to what this is. This early into the story, it wouldn't do to make readers hop to Google. just a thought

    He made a hole in my flexor carpi radialis muscle and placed a gem as he said.
    I am a Villain within the Heroes Party
    Fantasy · Kiyoki_02
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun1d
    Commented

    Fascinating. The Fake skill, huh? Reminds me of the one from Cautious Hero. Interesting first chapter. on to the next

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
    I am a Villain within the Heroes Party
    Fantasy · Kiyoki_02
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun1d
    Commented

    Bro is really hung up on the idea. That's a good sign

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    I am a Villain within the Heroes Party
    Fantasy · Kiyoki_02
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun9d
    Replied to FelipeMontel

    Everything. Everything they both have

    "You don't need to give me an answer right now. I didn't hope you would. We have greater concerns at the moment, don't we? Let us focus on those for now. It is in both our best interests if you manage to defeat your other self and with the power that will be produced upon your merge charge against Somanda. I feel what you manifest at that time will be a great starting point," Serenity said.
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun9d
    Posted

    Solid work! I feel that the pace is a bit too brisk at the beginning, with our MC being chucked into a training arc from the first chapter, but as you read on, the world expands and it all starts to click together. The magic abilities introduced are interesting and I'd day the MC shows an affinity for them that's enough to pique a reader's interest, which is a plus! Great work!

    Negative Point
    Fantasy · KershawSog
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun9d
    Commented

    Dear Lord, this was a long chapter! When compared to the previous ones, at least! Interesting though

    Ch 4 No way
    Negative Point
    Fantasy · KershawSog
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun9d
    Commented

    Hmmm. Sacrificial abilities, ey? That's interesting. I was a little doubtful about the potential Fuyu saw in Ryoshi, but it's interesting that we are already getting to see that he was right

    Ch 3 Hope
    Negative Point
    Fantasy · KershawSog
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun9d
    Commented

    While I like the training arc, I'm not sure it was best to start with it. though of course I'm only 2 chapters in, and can't have seen the whole vision behind the novel. Interesting concepts though! On to the next!

    Ch 2 Hopeful
    Negative Point
    Fantasy · KershawSog
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun9d
    Commented

    bruh

    "No, moving at 5% of my max speed is invisible to the naked eye," Fuyu explained casually.
    Negative Point
    Fantasy · KershawSog
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun9d
    Commented

    Wow. this is one of the fastest chapters I've ever read. Got all the essential information out of the way! Nice let's see how we move from here

    Ch 1 Hopeless
    Negative Point
    Fantasy · KershawSog
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun10d
    Replied to Grandmist_God

    You flatter me😅😅

    Ch 1155 What Makes It Rich (2)
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun13d
    Replied to JailGoo

    Yes. It's been mentioned a few times in the story and it's mentioned in the auxiliary chapters

    Ch 1141 Mors, Serene Grace (1)
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun24d
    Replied to Nissim_Yeshua

    You flatter me😊😊

    Ch 1144 Weathering The King's Wrath! (2)
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun25d
    Replied to FelipeMontel

    Jerthrax

    "I know why you killed him first. Indeed, he was already beyond saving, soul-wise, and if he fell into the necromancer's hands…" the Giant paused and a grave look appeared on his face. "You are right. The Scaled Elder was more than just some guardian beast. He was family. He was yet to grow as old, as powerful and as wise as his brother, Jiggorrhax, but he was still a bastion of Edagon and Aigas as a whole. It's a shame his duty now falls onto me and my successor so soon."
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun25d
    Replied to FelipeMontel

    Indeed. But of course, Replicus doesn't know about that yet.

    "I'm afraid it's impossible to claim his soul for any meaningful use. That attack of yours did significant damage. If it weren't for the fact that Caxellac's soul was in a higher league than a normal one, it would have been destroyed. But all the same, its refined fabrics must have been obliterated, which means you can't use it to forge a weapon as you did with the necromancer's."
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun25d
    Replied to Percent_Grader

    Not. Replicus gathered its essence to form Maximum Catalyst for that time using the evolved Harmonic Ember. It is still the same. I get how that is confusing

    Using Spatial Lightning, he teleported himself far away from both the charge of the bulls and Caxellac without forgetting to retrieve his severed arm which held tight the Fallen Reincarnator's Shadow!
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • Shade_Arjuun
    Shade_Arjuun25d
    Replied to Percent_Grader

    It's a Territory that isn't making use of its active attack or defense functions. Like how the beasts simply erect their Territories to relax within them

    This was simply, a Dormant Territory.
    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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