Review Detail of Zero_619 in High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic

First of all the story is good with good english unlike the MTL translation that is seen on this site. Now the story starts in HP canon and the MC is already over 1000 years old and even though he has retained his previous memories but hadn't done anything about voldemort before the start of the canon. The MC is Lord Ravenclaw by marrying the twin sister of Helena Ravenclaw but knowing that voldemort will make a horcrux of the diadem still did nothing to stop it and let everything happen as canon. The first 60 chapters are more of a fix it canon than actual story of the MC which starts after 70 chapters. The author for some god forsaken reason wrote 8 chapters with Harry Potter pov about his entire school year seperately when the MC's school year finished in 3 chapters. Now the story is not bad itself as I wrote above but could have been better. Like writing the first chapter about his return to Hogwarts and then start his origin story and others such as intervention in the voldemort situation much before than shown here.