Review Detail of Belthezzor in A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
Review detail
I tried to keep going, but the MC just gets worse as the story goes on. He basically turns into a busybody "Karen" with no self development. The plot of the story...what plot? It's just the MC and his harem and other hanger ons going to other world, looting, starting fights that begin because of mostly the MC and his brattish behavior. It became a chore to read at this point, and that is after forcing myself to continue in the hopes of some improvement. Now i'm sure a bunch of the fanboys and girl will be attacking this review, but, meh.
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
AStoryForOne
Liked by 5 people
LIKEReplies2
Dude, the story is full of plot. Skyrim? It started with exploration, then protection from dragons, then vampires and helping DragonBorn get a girlfriend, and ending with the search of the Scrolls Scáthach? Training, development --> Grail wars. His own world? Heroes, yokai, fae, Khaos, war. RWBY? Fun, and resting place(here and Bleach you are right but they are fun and resting place from the plot). Fate Grand? An OP guy he doesnt see himself beating and is training while preparing for war. So yeah. Whats your question about?!?!
I guess he is sad about the lack of goal for the MC. he is just floating around different worlds enjoying life and the most problem you mentioned are just him intervening in things rather than one for himself. Like Naruto being Hokage, being the strongest, saving someone etc etc. There is no end goal here, nothing to look forward to. It's just slice of life with extra steps with word vomit for most chapters. For me personally, getting Meridian (Best girl btw) pregnant is the main goal of the MC. Reviving his mother could also be good. And this is what I think the review guy is trying to say. I enjoyed the story very much evident in how I have been binging from 267 till the end in four days.
Raltol_Lotlar:Dude, the story is full of plot. Skyrim? It started with exploration, then protection from dragons, then vampires and helping DragonBorn get a girlfriend, and ending with the search of the Scrolls Scáthach? Training, development --> Grail wars. His own world? Heroes, yokai, fae, Khaos, war. RWBY? Fun, and resting place(here and Bleach you are right but they are fun and resting place from the plot). Fate Grand? An OP guy he doesnt see himself beating and is training while preparing for war. So yeah. Whats your question about?!?!