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Belthezzor

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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor1mth
    Replied to SYAWALTDL

    I agree. Plus the MC liked the hood for his original outfit.

    [Insert pictures of Black Spider-Suits here] (A/N: Most likes will be what his suit looks like now.)
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor3mth
    Posted

    So much wasted potential. The story started out good, but then the author just dropped another character in with no thought, and then basically mentally killed the MC.

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    Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy
    Book&Literature · Ashmodai
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor3mth
    Replied to Belthezzor

    Also, if he has all the knowledge of Moros/Merlin, wouldn't he know about the communication stones and their connection to the Ori galaxy?

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: The Status of Earth
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    Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy
    Book&Literature · Ashmodai
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor3mth
    Commented

    So he knows that there are pieces of tech left by Merlin/Moros, and a vault full of gold (which he needs; as he does need money according to the scene in Gringotts) and knowledge of the Sangral, but chooses to leave it alone?

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: The Status of Earth
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    Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy
    Book&Literature · Ashmodai
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor4mth
    Posted

    I tried to keep going, but the MC just gets worse as the story goes on. He basically turns into a busybody "Karen" with no self development. The plot of the story...what plot? It's just the MC and his harem and other hanger ons going to other world, looting, starting fights that begin because of mostly the MC and his brattish behavior. It became a chore to read at this point, and that is after forcing myself to continue in the hopes of some improvement. Now i'm sure a bunch of the fanboys and girl will be attacking this review, but, meh.

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    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
    Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor4mth
    Replied to Belthezzor

    Barely 20 (with the two years in the Land of Shadows).

    Ch 91 Chapter 86
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    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
    Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor4mth
    Commented

    What is it with the MC calling other teenagers, kid? He is barely 18 himself. Even if he has some of Zelretch's memories, he is more of a proper reincarnation, like DXD Hercules, Can Can, etc. than what is done in isekai stories. It's kind of jarring.

    Ch 91 Chapter 86
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    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
    Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor4mth
    Commented

    What relationship? He just met Rin, and he isn't Zelretch. There is being friendly and getting to know someone, then there is this forced relationship that comes off as, "because the author likes Rin, duh!"

    Ch 40 Chapter 39
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    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
    Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor5mth
    Commented

    That oath seems to have had him sworn loyalty to her, not the other way around.

    Ch 3 Oath
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    The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World
    Anime & Comics · itachi1010
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor6mth
    Commented

    Is the "Father" a catholic priest type? and are they calling Nonou "Sister" like in asian countries, or like a nun? Because if it the catholic type, it makes no sense being in Naruto.

    Ch 6 CH. 6 NONOU YAKUSHI ( Rewrite )
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    multiverse: gamer system
    Anime & Comics · ShadowPanda_538
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor6mth
    Commented

    I on't understand why he needs investors, when it was stated that he had all the capital needed to start his company, and had revenue streams supplying more. Investors are only needed when you need startup funds.

    Ch 18 Going Down The Rabbit Hole
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    Finding Purpose In The Multiverse: Meta Essence Quest Mode
    Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor6mth
    Commented

    What about the skills the MC was supposed to get as rewards for quests and lvl 10 (I think). There was least 3 of them, but he hasn't gotten any new ones in his status, or inventory.

    Ch 117 Chapter 116 - The Eight of Escalation
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    All-Powerful : Summoning System
    Anime & Comics · I_S_Rift
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor6mth
    Commented

    Great chapter. I especially love the manipulation on words to get Overhaul to agree to the deal, costing him his soul.

    Ch 24 Proverbs 20:17
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    Lucifer Quirk
    Anime & Comics · Prognastat
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor7mth
    Commented

    Is the MC Tsundere? That last sentence is cliche Tsun Tsun material, lol.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Olivia
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    This isn't High School DxD, damn it!
    Anime & Comics · The_POZ
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor7mth
    Commented

    For shame!! That Porsche over and Aston Martin DBS Superleggera?! The blasphemy!

    Ch 32 Chapter Thirty-One
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    The barber:Dc
    Others · John_Len_2493
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor7mth
    Replied to LordPhenex026

    Translation: It is forced to create drama. And yes, definitely will be taking my exit, as this story is getting worse as it goes on. Good luck

    Ch 82 Chapter 82: 19 and 20
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    I'm Gohan!
    Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor7mth
    Commented

    I believe the fastest 10K in the world is around 26 minutes. Agent 47 should be able to finish in a much more reduced time.

    Ch 1 Starting over & Agent 47
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    fghhhfffffffffff
    Movies · LM_loreweaver
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor9mth
    Commented

    14 feet tall (4.5 meters), and bulky? that literally twice the size of Shaquille O'Neal. how does that even work, especially in the bedroom where almost all the women would be five and a half feet tall (1.6 meters) or if you maximize around six feet (1.8)?

    Ch -3 Imperium Basic info (Not a chapter) (WIP)
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    The God-Emperor in Multiverse(R-18 Version)
    Book&Literature · LordDrogon123
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor9mth
    Posted

    The story started okay, then went down the drain quickly after they started universe hopping. The author states that it is because of character development, but character development is a gradual process that builds as time goes on, not the male MC just snapping and threatening his first wife, which apparently happened behind the scenes retrospectively. It literally came out of nowhere, like BAM! this happened before these chapters, and here is a shitty overview of the sequence of events. The events which show the first wife becoming a power obsessed psychopath wanting to prove her husband wrong because he yelled at her, which he rightfully needed to. It's trash, that I thought would improve, which is the only reason I lasted this long reading.

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    Mikaelson Family Across The Multiverse
    TV · _EMI_
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  • Belthezzor
    Belthezzor10mth
    Commented

    Can Loki please die soon? He brings nothing to the story except delusion and flights of grandeur, not even a blip in a fight, only to exude arrogance.

    Ch 159 CHAPTER 157
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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