Review Detail of Fenris321 in Zero Fate against the world
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Amongst the best novels I’ve read on here. It’s not a fanfic, it just steals elements from Bloodborne. If this was a regular novel, I’d pay good money for it. The writing is filled with errors, but the prose itself is great. The world building is extensive and complex; while the plot is original and building to be epic in scale. My onLu complaint is the formatting, reading it can be difficult. Well done mate, keep it up!!!
Zero Fate against the world
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Abadom:In the most recent chapter, the formating has already changed to the normal one used in the Us if I am not mistaken. Thank you for the review. I can't do much about the writing since English is my first language. I am getting better and better, the only editor I have is the automatic corrector from google docs and Grammarly. At least, I am better than many of those translations out there, I think its more than readble
In the most recent chapter, the formating has already changed to the normal one used in the Us if I am not mistaken. Thank you for the review. I can't do much about the writing since English is my first language. I am getting better and better, the only editor I have is the automatic corrector from google docs and Grammarly. At least, I am better than many of those translations out there, I think its more than readble