Was surprised by this trial read. This web novel has great potential however because it's a trial read my assessment will be half biased. One not enough chapters to display how great this novel is. Two last few chapters up to chapter 40 the pronoun usage was confusing when used to describe Qin Yue our male lead. It keep switching back and forth from he to she, that was weird in my opinion and should be looked over again for such grammar errors. Third thing I noticed is that the usage of the transmigration system was so spare that I almost forgot about it due to the great storytelling and interactive moving plot. Fourth thing I believe that is necessary is a mecha description chapter of the mechas for a better imagery. Overall this novel isn't bad for a binge read and I highly recommend this to mecha fans.
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