Jay_Exile
A lazy, bald old man who enjoys reading adventure, martial arts and cyber punk stories. Also avid listener to drum&bass and synth wave.
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Himself and he needs to be replaced by herself and she since it's referring to Irene.
I believe that you need to use she here instead of he because it's referring to Irene here not Ziel.
Princess Fritz, lol! Prince Fritz, ok.
It should be him not her.
Not a story I expected to read but found it enjoyable read nonetheless. Needs a comedy tag and definitely is a possible romcom. The MC is vicious yet more humane than most characters in this novel. Honestly think that this web novel is fantastic enough for more chapters but only time can tell. I highly recommend reading this web novel and enjoying the short 40 chapter binge ride. Adding this web novel to my reading list.
It should be sister not brother in this context.
Young instead of Yong.
It should be She not He starting this sentence
Niece should be used here instead of nephew
He should be used here instead of she
Pronoun He should be used here instead of She. Grammar error.
I thought Ziel was chanting for a spell but that translation is a lot better.
Ziel shouldn't be used here, instead it should be Ken.
Needs to be translated. Jumping from English to another language and then back to English is confusing.
Was surprised by this trial read. This web novel has great potential however because it's a trial read my assessment will be half biased. One not enough chapters to display how great this novel is. Two last few chapters up to chapter 40 the pronoun usage was confusing when used to describe Qin Yue our male lead. It keep switching back and forth from he to she, that was weird in my opinion and should be looked over again for such grammar errors. Third thing I noticed is that the usage of the transmigration system was so spare that I almost forgot about it due to the great storytelling and interactive moving plot. Fourth thing I believe that is necessary is a mecha description chapter of the mechas for a better imagery. Overall this novel isn't bad for a binge read and I highly recommend this to mecha fans.