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ngl im no no cosplayer but i was mad shocked when i found out i loked just like how there decribing this man in the stroy lol

naaah, I has nothing to do with Harry potter, at the very least its a bit logical there. in these novel they burn thieves ??!!!! seriously !!!!!@@ when I read this part, it completely dissuaded me from reading the novel.

i mean it depends on where you came from and what time it was so wont be surprised if there was a time they burn thieves i mean some cut there hand off or i mean they burn girls for being witches back in the days with no proof at all but word of mouth from somebody that hates them

Personally don't mind the 'Harry Potter' introduction, but the grammar and his introduction to the world after falling is what dissuaded me.