how is it so easy to trick a person with observasion haki with that? if he had the observation haki the whole time focus on the MC he should have known when he moved even just a little bit, but he get trick by replacing a doll?

welcome back, been waiting for a while, im glad you didn't dropped it.

true i get that but a comic relief doesn't have to be so dumb though that he doesn't have a common sense or a headache hahah its been a while since I've read the so forgetting bout it but ye when it comes to harem though it just depends on the individual's personal preference

true killing children stuff is messed up specially on our perspective but remember his in a world where a child had already killed and will kill more people and they probably trying to kill him too even though they are still weak having that much power and always on edge between life and death and how messed up the world is not surprised he snap

i mean it depends on where you came from and what time it was so wont be surprised if there was a time they burn thieves i mean some cut there hand off or i mean they burn girls for being witches back in the days with no proof at all but word of mouth from somebody that hates them

is this harem? and is there gonna be alot the scene where the girl disciple is being annoying?

i haven't read it yet but if were talking about from being human to eternal personality well it will depend on his point of view as a human did he have a good life or something? and we don't know if something change to him because of being eternal it might have done something to him and he did just die so that can change personality. Another thing is that he might have seen the bad part of humanity at this point like slavery and all the bad stuff that will really make you loss hope of human being which wont be surprised if he end up hating then really... we wont really know how we will be when we gain powers just imagine a lot of people change the moment they became rich and treat poor people like some monkey just because they are not rich or on equal level as them in status. so him being a hater can be understandable

yoooo i laugh so hard suddenly🤣🤣🤣

dammm i wish this comment has continuation to it like the novel i would definitey read it🤣🤣🤣

dam the story was getting good but it seems its going to a harem direction kinda made me loss interest it became 1 of those cliche where she picks up woman by saving them or from the enemy...o well was good read till then

bro i know your lazy to write new things to the story but gon is different here cause he trained for a bit and he has nen so how exactly did he loss to hanzo so easily like 1st 1 when he got the technique, fighting experience and nen you made it seem like his training didnt do anything to him

actually bro its not about being blind but he just didnt think of it like you cant expect a person to know every possible solution on his problem every person is different to you it might be so obvious but to others they might not be able to think about it

right like i get it his mad cause he was taken to mental hospital but he didnt even feel anything when he killed somebody and some plot holes here and there too

he was dressed as a clown from the beginning when he transmigrate and the bat was on last chapter by the end but the way it was explain was kinda little bit confusing

not just the gamers mind really but because his in avatar world where killing is normal and constantly at war for 100yrs but its nice you point out why he did things normally though and 2nd can u start putting on how many months or days has it been specially during his training

too many plot holes i know that its marvel universe specificly mcu so they shouldnt have known hydra exist at where they at right now and please domt say that cause the timeline here is not very accurate

the only exception probably is when it comes to fighting power when your basicly way pass being human as and why did he get stronger when he raised his fighting technique its supposed to make his technique better and experience but you made it connected to he got little stronger on strength

bro i know you said that its a chinese novel style but its better if you do that kind of story thats more realistic to the situation and place like if you did this story when his on hydra it will be more believable if they kill each other there your chinese novel would be better on that environment and i know you used the agent level as a measure of strength right now but i dont really think its right im pretty sure combat strength is more of a basic to have but main point is more on brain

you could probably consider it because of gamers mind