You lost me right away when you started to add tentacles into this, and that's just in the early chapters. I can't imagine the monstrosity's that await for me later in the book.
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LIKEI came back to reply because my other comment was shadow banned and I didn't know like a month later. So on chapter 7 nessova is doing a girl with her d**k or the English is pretty messed up and it reads like that. At first I thought it was tentacles but than I re-read it carefully and it kinda read like that. I know coming back to this is pretty pointless and you may not even see my reply but I wanted my review to at have a little bit of sense.
Crash_Cooper:I was copying and pasting but there no tentacles...