Review Detail of The_EnlightenedOne in Lemillion In The MCU

Item: Lemillion In The MCU
Rating: 5

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The_EnlightenedOneLv142yrThe_EnlightenedOne

Great fanfic. Astounding writing, good upload rate, long chapters, and a good story. Although in chapter twelve he ruined the story by having his love intrist cheat on him. Fanfics aren't supposed to have drama like that. Kinda defeats the purpose in my opinion. Nobody wants to see the mc get cucked. Other than me just being stingy about that it is a great story that definitely deserves a chance.

Lemillion In The MCU

The_Young_Flash

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The_Young_FlashAuthorThe_Young_Flash

Thanks... I know that... But I kind of wanted to show the reality of the situation. Christine likes Mirio but she loves Dr. Strange. I wanted to show that the MC won't get all the plot armors in the world. Also, we all know that Christine belongs with Dr. Strange - just watch WHAT-IF and Dr Strange movie.

2yr

M_e_t_aLv4M_e_t_a

I'm gonna cry if he actually tries to propose to her. You can't Do ThaAt tO MIRiO PLLLeaeeeeeeAASSSASefdgygydesgfgsefgbskjbgbsefbshfubsbffbsebfseb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The_Young_Flash:Thanks... I know that... But I kind of wanted to show the reality of the situation. Christine likes Mirio but she loves Dr. Strange. I wanted to show that the MC won't get all the plot armors in the world. Also, we all know that Christine belongs with Dr. Strange - just watch WHAT-IF and Dr Strange movie.

2yr

The_EnlightenedOneLv14The_EnlightenedOne

Its just that I feel you have made this too realistic. A lot of people are going to hat your fic for this alone. The again, I've only been reading on this app for 2 years. Do your thing.

The_Young_Flash:Thanks... I know that... But I kind of wanted to show the reality of the situation. Christine likes Mirio but she loves Dr. Strange. I wanted to show that the MC won't get all the plot armors in the world. Also, we all know that Christine belongs with Dr. Strange - just watch WHAT-IF and Dr Strange movie.

2yr

HgomaLv4Hgoma

It's a fan fic bro ,write whatever you want that's the purpose of a fan fic😑

The_Young_Flash:Thanks... I know that... But I kind of wanted to show the reality of the situation. Christine likes Mirio but she loves Dr. Strange. I wanted to show that the MC won't get all the plot armors in the world. Also, we all know that Christine belongs with Dr. Strange - just watch WHAT-IF and Dr Strange movie.

2yr