Here are my thoughts based on what I read so far, World Building: The world building is okay for now, I mean the situation of the zombie apocalypse from the two main character is quite well done with the tension. Therefore, I hope there are further expansions about the world and the system that the Main Character, Kawai got. CHarater: I think Kawai as a protagonist is quite unique compare to other system book. First of all, the introduction of his character is not get "bullied". Second he already got a girlfriend in the start which is an interesting direction. Lastly, his personality is not like typical whiny and edgy boy cliche type MC like majority of WN characters, instead he is quite a chill guy. I also like the set up for his next journey especially as a Zombie. Anyway, here is some nitpicky opinion or flawed that I found in this novel, so far and I am sorry to say this I think The description of the character's appearance and the world or even the zombie itself, for now, is quite vague especially there is no further detailed. Overall, it's quite enjoyable read and I do like the opening starting with an action scene. Keep up the good work!!
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LIKEkuhaku_sora:Thank you for your honest review, mate! Your words are also linked to mine! I have the same realisation about the vague details of my character. Thanks a lot, and I will sure live up to your expectations, fellow author!image