Review Detail of RandomGuy2648 in The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility

Item: The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility
Rating: 2.6

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RandomGuy2648Lv22yrRandomGuy2648

Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.

The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility

Levelling Up Alone

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Universal_MonarchLv1Universal_Monarch

hah, way to discourage the poor guy, but i agree

2yr

JOSH_ONELv2JOSH_ONE

read Cultivator King, you won't be disappointed.

Universal_Monarch:hah, way to discourage the poor guy, but i agree

2yr

VollidiotLv5Vollidiot

So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.

2yr

Universal_MonarchLv1Universal_Monarch

thx

JOSH_ONE:read Cultivator King, you won't be disappointed.

2yr

JOSH_ONELv2JOSH_ONE

Power Level : Immortals* it's on my page ;)

Universal_Monarch:thx

2yr

Universal_MonarchLv1Universal_Monarch

thx

JOSH_ONE:Power Level : Immortals* it's on my page ;)

2yr

Luffy_For_The_WinLv4Luffy_For_The_Win

There is a difference between marvel and this novel. Marvel is a major franchise loved by many that has years of buildup and credible plot(time stone didn’t really break the plot by the way) that is able to give good stories with good explanations behind instances. This story on the other hand is like, here is power and he is instantly able to control said power with no real character development.

Vollidiot:So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.

2yr

Spare_Lv14Spare_

did u rly jus compare marvel to this💀

Vollidiot:So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.

2yr

Phantom_X143Lv3Phantom_X143

yes Marvel's entertaining and this is not..Grow up to know the difference.

Vollidiot:So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.

1yr