Review Detail of marsolino in Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
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I’d give it a shot if the grammar was any better. We can all bear with some errors and faulty translations, and let’s not talk about Chinese tropes, but this is another level. The grammar is completely out of whack and entire paragraphs repeat themselves, points of view get jumbled and entire paragraph POVS only make the story messier. Final thoughts: nice idea, a god that’s not the Big Three and has an unusual power, executed very badly. The MC goes to sleep three chapters in and misses 1 thousand years of story and plot development.
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
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