once iI.awhile

totally forgot Ii decided to delete everything but sure.

ya sorry should've made it more thrilling

nooo- don't read it yet, if you reach the lattest chapter you'll know that I'm planning a third rewrite from scratch but it's better to wait.you could read if you still want to tho, I've been told it gets boring

I'm gonna be honest probably gonna take a year or two, been reading a few other novels to get inspiration from.I might post occasional chapters once in awhile but I would rather do a mass release at once, the prologue was experimental.but in the meantime why don't you read some novels to, the one I'm currently reading is pretty good the writing style is amazing and the protagonist is just so interesting.if you don't mind reading novels then try reading Salvos(a monsters evolution litpg)it's a fantasy based novel on a demon's point of view in a fantasy world with a system .plus, it also helped me realize that maybe I should put more inner dialogue, thoughts between conversations instead of looking at it from someone else's pov.

honest I like it, ya realized that a bit on.plus the grammar isn't the best, which is why I'm planning on rewriting it all from scratch but I'm probably gonna write 40 chapters first or something to make sure everything is perfect.anyways, thanks for reading and bye

I'm trying to rework/write it from the ground up so I woudnt continue reading until i do that.

ya sorry reworking the story a third time so suggest not reading it until i do, the third rework is me rewriting it all by hand and making the story more consistent and orderly

ah quite a really good solution, shame i was already writing a third rework tho.(you could continue reading the story but I'm planning to rewrite it entirely from hand to make it more consistent)

no violent reactions? I mean I've reworked the story thrice and you've already made it pass a ton of chapters don't you feel anything?or did you find out I was writing a rework and skipped to the reworked chapter

or just don't, I'm not sure a rework would appeal to your tastes.

also in the rework not only do I plan to make the story more consistent, revise some event but also change the protagonist.I'll keep the personality like you said childish for like 1-2 chapters but he'll go to teenagish-young adult after a few events.just give me more critiques if your going for more specific changes tho.

ya sorry this is why I planned the rework at the end of the story. if you catch up to my lattest chapters you'll see I posted a note saying I'll rework the entire story by hand again.

I didn't realize new readers still came, regarding this issue in my latest post I wrote a note explaining that I'm planning to rework the entire series from scratch, currently the only reworked chapter i have is the prologue in the latest chapter.sorry for the problems in the reworked version I wanna rely more on myself and maybe a few grammar apps(a few, most of the grammar is from me), also I wanna make the story more consistent.

I do plan on romance but in different circumstances anyway won't tell to spoil the fun.

new readers still come 😅? sorry to tell you this but I mostly relied on grammar apps when I first started(yes even when I re-edit the first draft).btw I'm planning on doing a mass rework from the ground up so reading the whole story is pretty much pointless. the rework in itself is me relying mostly on my self from my past experience, the flow of the story still goes the same but I wanna make some moderate changes. currently there's only one reworked chapter which is the largest chapter but anyway ya.i have no idea how you found this fanfic.

will me writing it in a slightly different style affect the story? if so in a negative or positive way.don't hold back even if it's a critique

technically it's a reworked prologue(cause ya know in reworking/rewriting all my chapters) but I wanted to add some dialogue to the characters instead of copypasting from the wiki.but as the first commenter what ya think?

I suggest don't I'm gonna need to rewrite it from scratch without coptpasting this original script and writing it from the ground up

yes, cause trading my fanfic from the bottom to up I found a some things that didn't add up.I especially wanna fix the time periods and rewrite some events that people found useless