Review Detail of Aerys in Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature

Writing Quality: I'm sorry, but for someone like me reading this is a bit painful. I would suggest at least having an editor or beta reader to go through with it just to make corrections in grammar and sentences because some sentences don't make sense. Story Development: It's developing quite nicely, I would say. It takes a different view on the mythology. There's just not much for me to comment on right now. Characters Design: A new type of character, an OC...Horray!! The thought put on the main character was fine, I can't say fleshed out yet because I haven't seen much challenges the main character faced. But the other characters in the story overall have personalities, but they're still a bit flat to me. Updating Stability: No comment, as long as this story gets finished I don't care either how long you update or how much you update. World Background: It's a fanfiction, the world already exists. You're not creating a new world, but maybe expanding on it or building on it. But as of now, the expansion/building I have yet to see much.