Review Detail of Dessy_Lusyanna_C_Y in My Sister-In-Law Is My Mate!?!

I love the premise dan the summary of the story. truthfully I read alot of novel about rebirth & transmigration for revenge. but to be honest, about this novel, I not quite fond with the writing style. occasinally I find the choice of words in writing is a little excessive. its just my humble opinion. I really hope, the author can be even better in the future and accept this as constructive criticism.