Review Detail of DaoistGirNPB in Re: Evolution Online
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I did not like this book at first and thought the author was an idiot, but since I had nothing else to read I carried on reading. The development of this book is insane and the writing is excellent I love all the characters and this is now one of my favourite books I can’t stress enough how this is a MUST READ. Best example of don’t judge a book by its first few pages 😂😂
Re: Evolution Online
Yolohy
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Thank you so much! please join the discord community and suggest in the edit section how I can make the first few chapters better. I am always open to suggestions and criticisms 🤗
DaoistGirNPB:Btw I read all 700 chapters in 2 days 😳 that’s how good it is
I feel that the first chapter is too weak I almost stopped reading there. I think the story should have started with Liam dying and talking about how much he failed in life and how he had lost everything. Then it should have jumped o him being bullied. Also when they are moving houses it threw me off how quickly and unrealistic it was. They basically moved houses in one day even if it’s just a short paragraph mention how Liam cashed out the in-game currency to real money and then looks for houses and contacts an estate agency. Also if Liam is so cynical of people why would he let some random neighbour he met basically look after his sister on the first day they met Also how old is Liam and his sister???
Yolohy:Thank you so much! please join the discord community and suggest in the edit section how I can make the first few chapters better. I am always open to suggestions and criticisms 🤗