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DaoistGirNPB

DaoistGirNPB

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Harsh critic. I detest badly translated, zero editing books.

2021-04-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2mth
    Commented

    No one speaks like this

    "Let us form up and tackle the first layer together," Alan declared, his voice filled with determination. "The first layer is teeming with draconic lizards, but we'll clear it in just two hours. We must hasten our progress to have ample time for conquering the third layer."
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    Level Up Legacy
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2mth
    Posted

    The beginning of the story is backwards. You completely breezed past the Mc transmigration and sqeezed it into 1 paragraph?? Also the writing quality is so poor. Have you considered using chatgpt to spell check and make sure the chapters aren’t in 3 different tenses 💀

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    Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy
    Fantasy · xlntz
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Replied to DaoistiICGyK

    U write this on every novel

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Low Stats
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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Replied to DaoistGirNPB

    Im just annoyed because the comments made it seem like this was a good story but it’s not LOL. Also this story it NOTHING like classroom elite.

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    Gifted Academy: The Perfect Student
    Realistic · EvanMu
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Posted

    From chapter 700 onwards the translation becomes flawless.

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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Replied to Yorbin

    This is what I thought but the story does get ALOT better. There is a reason why it is so popular

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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Posted

    This book was great up until chapter 500 and tolerable till 800 and I just can’t continue. its a whole lot of what the actual heck is this storyline? I think the author is very confused.

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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Commented

    What the actual heck am I reading

    Ch 740 Battle Through The Heavens [Part 3]
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Replied to Yolohy

    I feel that the first chapter is too weak I almost stopped reading there. I think the story should have started with Liam dying and talking about how much he failed in life and how he had lost everything. Then it should have jumped o him being bullied. Also when they are moving houses it threw me off how quickly and unrealistic it was. They basically moved houses in one day even if it’s just a short paragraph mention how Liam cashed out the in-game currency to real money and then looks for houses and contacts an estate agency. Also if Liam is so cynical of people why would he let some random neighbour he met basically look after his sister on the first day they met Also how old is Liam and his sister???

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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Replied to DaoistGirNPB

    Btw I read all 700 chapters in 2 days 😳 that’s how good it is

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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB1yr
    Posted

    I did not like this book at first and thought the author was an idiot, but since I had nothing else to read I carried on reading. The development of this book is insane and the writing is excellent I love all the characters and this is now one of my favourite books I can’t stress enough how this is a MUST READ. Best example of don’t judge a book by its first few pages 😂😂

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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2yr
    Posted

    Extremely descriptive story with almost perfect grammar but a very slow read. The author goes into exteme depth with their descriptions to help the reader build an image, but for me its too much. If you’re someone who likes detail but wants a relatively paced novel this is probably not for you. You will find yourself passively scrolling through the book to get to the point because the author spends whole chapters describing one thing.

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    Monarch of Time
    Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2yr
    Posted

    Im extremely picky with Grammar when reading, but the Grammar in this book Is pretty good. Though there are a few mistakes with tenses ect, Its very tolerable for the most part. There is a Sh** load of detail in this story, like alottttttttt its almost insufferable honestly. The author could probably describe a building for 2 whole chapters. Im already on chapter 43 and i have no clue where this story is going or what the end goal is other than the ‘holy mission’. Obviously if you’re into detail and this ‘holy mission’ this novel is probably for you. However if you’re looking for a novel with a strong plot/ some hint of direction and fan service you probably wont make it past chapter 10. But if you’re willing to continue reading to discover this plot maybe you will come across a gem. I dont know though because im stopping here lol!

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    The Sinful Life of The Emperor
    Urban · True_Seeker
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2yr
    Posted

    Writing quality is great, little to no grammar mistakes, but the story not so much. If you’re interested in an idiot op mc who stupidly pretend to be weak and nauseatingly kind this is the story for you.

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    Reincarnated at Level Two Million
    Action · Alphachoas
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2yr
    Replied to Ceaseless_Voices

    Racist

    Otherwise, why would the Jewish people have begged to have their country back?
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    I'm A Baller
    Urban · Short'nin' Bread
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2yr
    Replied to SlyImmortalDevil

    Racist

    Otherwise, why would the Jewish people have begged to have their country back?
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    I'm A Baller
    Urban · Short'nin' Bread
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  • DaoistGirNPB
    DaoistGirNPB2yr
    Commented

    Nice

    Part 0: Prologue
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    Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)
    Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
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