Review Detail of Ken_Lamoste in Civilization
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This is what I've been looking for how many months, to those who like "The World Online" and "Lords Empire" this is for you!!. The character development is good, MC's temperament is also good, neither arrogant and good, its just balance. How I wish that I didn't discover this early now Im stuck at waiting for new chapters. anyway read this guys this is a hidden gem!!
Civilization
DaoistZqipHd
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Are you a lover of The Lords Empire? :O Ready, your novel goes to the library and will have my stones ♡
DaoistZqipHd:Aye, I love those two novels too!! It was the first handful of novels I read :D
yeah especially The Lords empire, people are really mad about the novel because of Harem but I still like it
Tarhuala:I absolutely adored those two books too, it was so good to me that I don't care about what anybody say. I really liked these type of plots.
Yeah the lord empire I really like their plot line and everything literally mtl all my way about 3 years ago because I'm too obsessed with it.
Ken_Lamoste:yeah especially The Lords empire, people are really mad about the novel because of Harem but I still like it
Ah, I see you are man of culture as well :3, since someone finally make more kingdom building novel, I will bookmark this, and sorry for those long info dump comment I just send to you, if you need specific topic/material for idea and writing technique, you can ask me, I will tailor it more for you when I read your novel. Last note, in most kingdom building novel the author tend to get problem with 'too many POV' without make it interesting or relevant for story enough, so I recommend you watch this video '10 Best Tips for Writing a Multi-Perspective Book' by 'Writing with Jenna Moreci' channel, some part of the video will be perfect in make the kingdom building aspect even greater here (like how to write local/outsider or citizen react to the change the mc bought)
DaoistZqipHd:Aye, I love those two novels too!! It was the first handful of novels I read :D
DaoistZqipHd:Aye, I love those two novels too!! It was the first handful of novels I read :D
Tarhuala:I absolutely adored those two books too, it was so good to me that I don't care about what anybody say. I really liked these type of plots.
DaoistZqipHd:Aye, I love those two novels too!! It was the first handful of novels I read :D
DaoistZqipHd:Aye, I love those two novels too!! It was the first handful of novels I read :D
DaoistZqipHd:Aye, I love those two novels too!! It was the first handful of novels I read :D
