Review Detail of Vahvel in MARVEL: GAMER PATH
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I hate people that just give 5-star reviews because "it's *insert author name here*!" without giving any kind of constructive criticism what-so-ever. The story has quite a few flaws, from some basic grammar mistakes (that can be glossed over, as those things are inevitable) to stupid and nonsensical actions taken by characters, be they from the main cast or not. It makes the story feel unnatural and inflexible. The characters' personalities are so-so, with some characters being actually adequately thought out, while the others seem to be there just because. The story between the MC and Emily feels forced and unnecessary. It is simply there for the "cute" factor and to limit the MC and his choices early on. I have read from other reviews that it does get better, but I simply am not capable of pushing myself through this story any longer. Props to the author for good update stability.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
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Amen... I spike Spanish Spanish: Estoy totalmente de acuerdo... Y disculpa por no traducir esto en el traductor... Es un poco tedioso en el celular... Bueno... Mas que en computadora. De todas formas, era irritante leer como se volvió 'padre' la niña es el extra de los extra. Solo existe y ya. Deje de leer la historia cuando aparecio natasha... La viuda negra. Quiero decir, sus razones son estupendamente estúpidas y invasivas de lo poco que recuerdo, así que esa fue la gota que casi rebosa el baso y deje de leerlo. Ahora... El no leerlo durante tanto tiempo fue la gota que revaso el baso... Es decir... Lo sacare de mi biblioteca. (Sorry por el relleno).
