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Review Detail of zedmoto123 in Reincarnated as Amane Fujimiya (A Chat Group Fanfic)

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zedmoto123
zedmoto123Author9mthzedmoto123

No one wanted to rate this book of mine that's why i should do it myself.I'm writing for fun also i just decided to rewrite this book and change the story.you better expect that the update would be random because the College would start soon

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Reincarnated as Amane Fujimiya (A Chat Group Fanfic)

zedmoto123

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Avengtank
AvengtankLv5Avengtank

man if the rewrite is so bad i wonder how much bad the original was?? Bruh your concept is ok but u are running to fast , faster than a Lockheed SR-71 Blackbird and sometimes teleporting and skipping major keypoints which makes the story interesting. Please improve the story and remove the major randomness and give some backstory or introduce the powers and stuff. This will make the fanfic way better.

TheRedHood
TheRedHoodLv4TheRedHood

my bad bro I got you totally slipped my mind.

zedmoto123
zedmoto123Authorzedmoto123

honestly this is just me messing with something

TheRedHood:my bad bro I got you totally slipped my mind.