Review Detail of Vizeon in I like them big, do you?

Honestly, I liked it. Concept was nice, and not common. The MC is, to put it in a bad way, weird, to put it in a good way, he's just eccentric. For me, his personality is a breath of fresh air. Story is pretty nice, also it has a good twist for the vr genre. I can let that weak/inconsistent gaming system slide. I'd say this is pretty unique. My only qualm is about the grammar mistakes. Like using the wrong words but similar words, or confusing sentence construction sometimes. But they are all readable, if anything, it must be because of writing fatigue or because there is no editor.