Review Detail of vkg313 in Cosmic Peak
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So the world is heading for an apocalypse in 3 yrs and everyone on earth has the option to enter another world and get stronger. It's not a new concept, but that doesn't really matter. The story itself is alright, if you are into gamer stories with lots of screens and numbers, Good writing quality and update schedule too. The main problems of this story is the way it is currently structured. There isn't really an engaging plot. Like the main goal is just to get stronger, and going into different dungeons or opportunities to get stronger. That's it. There's no overarching plot in the Otherworld. It's just to kill monsters, earn money and level up, and repeat. He isn't solving problems that help people of the other world or anything. He just appears to be amassing strength the entire time. Also feels like the author sometimes falls into that pitfall, where the MC is the only one with good ideas and carries everyone else. Story has a lot of potential, but the author needs to work harder to make them happen.
Cosmic Peak
LivingVoid
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Another problem was that there was too much gamer info that we are constantly being bombarded with. As someone who has written a gamer story before, its easy to fall into the trap of focusing on the system and not of the story and plot. And just so we are clear, this review was written as of chapter 135.
I agree but not with all points. xD He is not there to help otherworld but to help himself. Everyone is there to help themselves get stronger and the initial plot is already in stone. The details in those plots consist of MC's adventure, how he gains strength, his life and death battles, and I reveal more about the "higher plot" as the story goes on. I don't know if you continued reading since this review but if you did, then you would know that. There isn't really a lot of screens since the initial chapters because I was already told early to not do screen status too much. I rarely show full screen but most of the time, I only show just a few lines of that particular thing from the whole status when it matters. Thanks for some of the inputs that I overlooked but now that i know them, I will be working on them :D. MC gets beaten back as well since obviously he is not all-mighty intelligent. His character will develop in the process of him getting stronger.
LivingVoid:I agree but not with all points. xD He is not there to help otherworld but to help himself. Everyone is there to help themselves get stronger and the initial plot is already in stone. The details in those plots consist of MC's adventure, how he gains strength, his life and death battles, and I reveal more about the "higher plot" as the story goes on. I don't know if you continued reading since this review but if you did, then you would know that. There isn't really a lot of screens since the initial chapters because I was already told early to not do screen status too much. I rarely show full screen but most of the time, I only show just a few lines of that particular thing from the whole status when it matters. Thanks for some of the inputs that I overlooked but now that i know them, I will be working on them :D. MC gets beaten back as well since obviously he is not all-mighty intelligent. His character will develop in the process of him getting stronger.
