first of, exelent work on the part of the writer for the work they created and hope you bless us all with more [img=update]. all right, review here we go... grammar: very good, its clear and free of mistakes as far as i have read as well as easy to follow. characters: when an othor successfully makes you attached to the Main character from the very first chapter, well that's when you know they did a good job so i will say no more. story: sooo much potential here so i say definitely give it a try and see for yourselfs.
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